Topic 2:Some people believe that government should pay for and offer housing to people who lost their homes or can not afford them. Agree or disagree.
It is argued that government ought to arrange funds to provide shelter to those who are rendering homeless due to natural disaster or poverty. I firmly agree to the statement because this is the moral & constitutional duty of the supreme power.
It is apparent that homeless people is a global problem & it needs to be addressed globally. undoubtedly, it is more serious for developing & third world countries. Nobody, in the world, wants to live without house. However, they are compelled to dwell in the tents either because of furious flood or earthquake. The government & related institutions are supposed to be responsible to create such an alarming situation.Thrust for money & negligible attitude towards nature has resulted horrible incident of avalanche (snow sliding), land sliding & tsunami. for example, a study report concluded the damage of nearly 2000 cr USD & innumerable people became house-less in the deadliest occurrence in 2004, in India.
What is more,the governments are of the people, for the people & by the people. Therefore, it is the responsibility & accountability of the system to assist the poor & the down-trodden who have no way but to sleep in the pipes, on the footpath, at the bus stands and/or at the railway stations. whatever may be the reasons, be it population, poverty, family relations, infectious disease or social boycott, If they are assigned some sort of jobs by the government & related organisations, they would be able to reside under the roofs. These poverty-stricken people must be ensured to live a life full of respect & dignity. To prove my point, the prime minister of India has promised to allot worth-living & affordable houses to approximately 2 million people by 2022. It is tough task, but can be materialized by effective and timely mechanism along with right sort of planning & judicious spending of money.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that it might put too much pressure on public exchequer, still, it is not an inaccessible goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, third, well, for example, in conclusion, sort of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13415184842 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649068322981 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9461819277 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18411635707 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534398561 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454128145432 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844484256805 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570847255707 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.