Many Children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?
Gaining life experience by working during teenage is popular among many nations and parents not only motivate but helps children to work either volunteer or paid job. There are various benefits and drawbacks of it that are discussed in detail.
One of the main advantage of working as child is that one will get ample of work experience that not only make child independent but also help them choosing the carrier path. For instance, one of my cousin started working in a computer shop in teenage, after school hours, where he not only learns about assembling the full computer system but also learn troubleshooting. When he enrolled in college for degree, he already chosen which course to take without any advice from elders. Because of the skills he gained during his part time work, his college offer him part time job. Therefore, working from an early age will not only independent the child but also he can choose his future.
Although working from teenage has merits, there are demerits also and one of the main is the development of bad habits that they can attain from bad influence from work. For example, they can become addicted to alcohol and drugs. It is found in a study that teenager’s starts smoking as fun but eventually it become part of their daily routine. Usage of drugs and alcohol for them are regular in parties. Even though laws are present to tackle these issues but they can get hold of these things through people who can legally purchase it.
To conclude, starting job as children helps personality and they attain various skills whereas, they can also develop bad habits because of bad influence at work. Therefore, parents should keep an eye on their children when sending to work. It can not only make their future but also destroy it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to choose' or 'choose'.
Suggestion: to choose; choose
...ke child independent but also help them choosing the carrier path. For instance, one of ...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to troubleshoot'.
Suggestion: to troubleshoot
...the full computer system but also learn troubleshooting. When he enrolled in college for degree...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ause of the skills he gained during his part time work, his college offer him part time j...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...s part time work, his college offer him part time job. Therefore, working from an early a...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...starts smoking as fun but eventually it become part of their daily routine. Usage of d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82679738562 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38814666187 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8191614454 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147114922616 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530837219736 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649634547055 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986572124338 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447647495783 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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