Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition between friends usually has negative impacts on friendship.
Currently, living in the society full of fierce competition, individuals are attaching more importance to the impacts of competition, thus triggering a heated discussion about the impacts of competition exerts on friendship. A bunch of individuals reckon that competition between friends is harmful to their friendship, while others contend that competition among friends does not exert negative effects on their relationship, competition is even conducive to reinforce it. Personally speaking, I concur with the latter opinion for reasons as follows.
To start with, competition between friends renders them a chance of helping with each other, which is conducive for them to boost their relationships. Nowadays, due to the intense rivalry in the society, all individuals spare no efforts to strengthen their all-round aptitudes, however, disadvantages are doom to exist in each individual, therefore during the process of preparation for the upcoming rivalry, friends are capable of helping with each other by learning from others’ perks to compensate for his or her shortcomings, which ensures their better performance in competition compared to preparing for competition without friends’ help. The research conducted to evaluate friends in the competition demonstrates that 78% testers harbor the idea that their friendship has been reinforced by rivalries since they realize the significance of friendship by cooperating with each other to make mutual progress. Conversely, merely part of testers contend that their friendships suffer from competitive relationships, but they also admit that the deteriorated friendship is supposed to be avoided. The research illuminates that through the achievement generated by the collaboration in competition, each individual is capable of realizing that the friendship is of crucial importance.
What’s more, since individuals suffering from the pressure generated by competition often feel frustrated and get their enthusiasm dampened, especially when they are confronted with insurmountable obstacles, they are likely to communicate with others. Under this circumstance, just as the old goes, a problem shared is a problem halved, they tend to share their frustration with their friends who possess the same experience as them and have a deep insight into the obstacles confronted with them, which renders them an opportunity to rely on each other to make concerted efforts to figure out the optimal approaches to overcome or address issues and conduct methods with joint efforts. During these process, they possess memorable experience enabling them to strengthen their friendship. For instance, during my preparation for the college entrance exam, I often had a discussion with my friend Rebecca about the most effective approaches to maximize my studying efficiency, enhance our academic performance and so on. Although we were competitors competing for being admitted by key universities, we helped with each other, not only make achievements in varieties of subjects but also possess a lot of experience worthy of cherishing, which lays a solid foundation of enduring friendship.
Admittedly, some individuals are likely to regard their friends as the biggest enemy during the competition, since they fail to realize the existence of other competitors. Nevertheless, a friend is merely one of the competitors, while there are numerous invisible competitors waiting for competing with us, which ought to be attached sufficient attention by us.
In a nutshell, competition among friends does not exert detrimental effects on maintaining the friendship, on the contrary, it constitutes a stepping stone to boost relationship through the cooperation and the shared experience in competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 52.1666666667 192% => OK
Nominalization: 37.0 8.0752688172 458% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3201.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 557.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74685816876 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24387057169 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518850987433 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 976.5 618.680645161 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.843857116 48.9658058833 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.0625 100.406767564 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8125 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219325471935 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869023441395 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520477101637 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139044582437 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655856443476 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 11.7677419355 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 58.1214874552 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 10.9000537634 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 86.8835125448 197% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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