Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
Comics, books, radio, television, film, theater
In the past few decades, we have been requiring information, in order to slake our mental thirst, as we human increases. Therefore, there are wide-range of source have been emerged for human to keep up with modern word, developing increasingly.
From my point of view, however we are receiving unmanageable data in various ways, books, television and radio are the most efficient methods to obtain info, among these means. First of all, television is one of the significant approach because it implies us to gain information forthwith. Secondly, many people, especially elders tend to choose radio because television or other screens are seemed too complicated. For example, my grandfather master on listen to radio because he believe that while television has detrimental impact for eyesight and numb movement, he would be able to do even exercises while receiving information from radio.
Finally, mankind have been using books for thousands of years, and we admit that book allows us to get close to get information, useful for particular person’s well-being, who prefer to read book. In addition to, we can acquire not only information, but also some of the important knowledge. Let’s take my friend Bat as example, when he was a 15 years old, he used to read philosophy and technical books. From now, my friend have obtain important skills, how to work on computer, which is playing crucial role in this modern society. Similarly, we youths can succeed, if we adolescents don’t consider book as troublesome.
To sum up, however we are accessible to plenty of such means, these three approaches, personally, are considerable to gain knowledge and information effectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 482, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...er master on listen to radio because he believe that while television has detrimental i...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... acquire not only information, but also some of the important knowledge. Let's take my...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'obtained'.
Suggestion: obtained
...chnical books. From now, my friend have obtain important skills, how to work on comput...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25461254613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98413354858 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5944543284 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112841051965 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372315491684 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246129645588 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569191190256 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280189146026 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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