Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th.
Write them a letter. In your letter:
• Make plans to meet them at a convenient location
• Specify a time and date
• Suggest some activities you may all participate in during their visit
The author and lecturer are both about torreya tree in florida. The author provides three ways to save them, but the professor state that these options are unlikely to be satisfactory solutions.
First the author declare to plant torreya in coolest dampest area of florida named microclimate. The lectures refutes this solution by indicating that this area is affected largely by changes of its environment. Global warning and wetlands of florida can influence the condition of microclimate that would be not good for planting torreya.
In addition the author posits that relocating Torreay to an entirely different location can save them from extinction. The professor invalidates this position by declaring that relocating plants by humans could have unwanted consequences for other plants and bio. he provides an example of black trees that were moved in the north and spread quickly. but they kill off other plants. this problems direct relocating of plants to unpredictable outcomes.
Furthermore, the author state that preserving torreya in research centers as closely monitored centers can protect them. The lecturer also contradicts this solution by announcing that populations of plants could not resist diseases. he add that two conditions are essential for combating diseases by plants: being in large quantity and being genetically diverse. research centers don’t have this capacity to hold the conditions.
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- Do you agree or disagree with following statement? because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- summarise the points made in the lecture. 3
- do you agree or disagree with following statement? it is important to know about events happening around the world, even it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th.Write them a letter. In your letter:•Make plans to meet them at a convenient location•Specify a time and date•Suggest some activities y 11
- Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage. 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'coolest the dampest'.
Suggestion: coolest the dampest
... the author declare to plant torreya in coolest dampest area of florida named microclimate. The...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'refute'.
Suggestion: refute
...lorida named microclimate. The lectures refutes this solution by indicating that this a...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...be not good for planting torreya. In addition the author posits that relocating Torre...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... consequences for other plants and bio. he provides an example of black trees that...
^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... moved in the north and spread quickly. but they kill off other plants. this proble...
^^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...uickly. but they kill off other plants. this problems direct relocating of plants to...
^^^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...uickly. but they kill off other plants. this problems direct relocating of plants to...
^^^^
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ns of plants could not resist diseases. he add that two conditions are essential f...
^^
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'adds'.
Suggestion: adds
...of plants could not resist diseases. he add that two conditions are essential for c...
^^^
Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Research
...quantity and being genetically diverse. research centers don't have this capacity t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 435, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this capacity to hold the conditions.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59174311927 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82065335452 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2929704566 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0714285714 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0345119009821 0.216113520407 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0123461292016 0.0766984524023 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258228146786 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0226367299797 0.12726935374 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145020016365 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 8.71597938144 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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