Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th.
Write them a letter. In your letter:
• Make plans to meet them at a convenient location
• Specify a time and date
• Suggest some activities you may all participate in during their visit
Dear John,
It’s Truong. I spent two college years staying with your family in Australia. I’ve heard that your whole family is coming to Ho Chi Minh City in Vietnam in early February. Thus, I’m writing this letter to let you know that I’m very excited to meet you and the others again.
For your convenience, I suggest that we meet up at your hotel’s cafeteria after you finish checking in your room on 31st January. You can call me at any time you like at my phone number 0912345678 and I’ll see you there in 30 minutes. Also, we’ll discuss the activities that all of us can participate during your trip here. I have a few ideas in mind already. One must-to-do thing that I recommend at the moment is going to highest tower in town to have an overlook at the city. I’ll tell you the other things to do in specific later.
I’m super excited to see you soon.
Your friend,
Truong
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| 2018-05-10 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
...that I recommend at the moment is going to highest tower in town to have an overlook at th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45727495076 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684848484848 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4455159754 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5833333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270841575028 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967442074013 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730676999856 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161255607634 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657696389983 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.