Nowadays the amount of rubbish are constantly increase in many countries of the world. why is it happening ? How can it be controlled and eventually reduced.
Environmental problems is the big worrying concern in modern world. Presently, rubbish things increase day by day in most of the countries.
Here, I would like to account the reasons of this phenomenon along with its solution.
There are manifold reasons behind this trend. First and foremost, materialistic attitude of people enhance the rubbish. To illustrate, masses purchase unnecessarily things because they want to depict their status in front of society and they throw old things into landfill site. Apart from it, excessive use of non -biodegradable things automatically increase the problem of rubbish as these things are not recycl .Thus, useless things which are not used again become the part of rubbish. What is more, illiterate people do not know how waste things upsurge the pollution level and they throw things which are reused.
Numerous remedial measure can be mentioned. Initially, people
should try to avoid unnecessarily shopping. Taking a real life example, a survey conducted in foreign country said that people can save 6 million rubbish problem if they control only one percent on their shopping. Moreover, government must put some outlaw on the use of non-biodegradable things.
To recapitulate, undeniably, people throw things which are useless. However, still I believe that large amount of rubbish pollute the environment at large extent which is detrimental for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, apart from, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45205479452 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86973132801 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9356095042 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2857142857 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130510903851 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421706681471 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431061296292 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665551978954 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035189482887 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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