Many people use distance-learning programs to study at home , but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is some people think that many benefits bring as much as attending collage or university, because many people use distance-learning programs to study at home. There is widespread worry that this would only lead to myriad of concerns in the society. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration. There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that study at collage or university students studied in groups and one problem in question on bring many different different solution. Needless to say, all these benefits stand something in good stead when doing something is concerned. Another pivotal acpect of this argument is that, many people study at home use distance learning programs, but I think that it cannot bring proper education and template to use in subjects topics. Besides, as much as attending in collage or university I think better education source to students and in education place bring many example on topic by teachers. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the people use distance learing programs to study at home and bring more and more benefits in education and study. In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of some people think that bring more education as much as attending collage or university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7776284806 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491379310345 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.609188889 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470187246342 0.242375264174 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174586216497 0.0925447433944 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174807494333 0.071462118173 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.470187246342 0.151781067708 310% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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