It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
making food is a challenging matter nowadays in modern society as many people do not have enough time to carry out it, and they are permanently busy. therefore, restaurants help them to buy food without requiring to prepare it. However, I would not like to eat food at the restaurant, thus, build a new restaurant near my vicinity owing to two main reasons I am going to mention them afterward.
First of all, big cities become more and more crowded, and many people living in it have suffered from the traffic jam and air pollution caused by it. one of the significant reasons is that cities are become crowded by parking cars in a popular part of it, where many restaurants are built. Consequently, this makes the environment crowded, and I would hate from crowded and populous places. take my friend as an example, his house was in the portion of the city, where was not crowded. he told me some restaurants was gradually being built near his house, then his neighbor becomes more and more crowded and would make the life tough for him. he obliged to park his car far away from his home since he did not have his own parking; thus, he walked a long way on a walk to reach the home and make him bored. this is one of the negative aspects of building a restaurant near my neighborhood.
Secondly, being healthy is the most vital matter, of which everyone cares, because when you are healthy, you do not contemplate much about it; but if you were ill and lost your health, you would usually contemplate about it. therefore, if you make your food by yourself, you will know what ingredient utilizes in it, and you can make healthy food by using less oil or organic material. Nevertheless, many restaurants need to make economical food and keep making food beneficial. As a result, many of them may not exert healthy foods, and I would not like to eat those types of foods. take one of my friends as an example, he usually went out and eat his food in the restaurant. Unfortunately, at one time, he poisoned from one of these foods and then obliged to go to the hospital for many days. when this happened to him, he told me that he would not go to the restaurant and prepare his food at home. this is another reason that persuades me not to go to a restaurant.
In sum, being built new restaurant close my home has a bad effect on my neighborhood, and I do not use the advantage of it. therefore, I oppose being built a new restaurant near my home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55880373284 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482222222222 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1716317816 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165375082235 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598762828235 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589647734119 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12063084433 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645722355635 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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