In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development?
Ever since the Internet emerged in the early 1990s, it has played a vital role in numerous aspects of people's live, ranging from shopping, working and communication. In my opinion, this advance has both positive and negative effects.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that the Internet is by far the most indispensable facet of modern society, greatly benefiting human in terms of convenience and comfort. As far as shopping aspect is concerned, geograpical distance has been narrowed by virtue of technological developments as well as the explosion of e-commerce businesses. Consumers can now purchase almost everything sold online in the comfort of own homes rather than visiting physical retailers. Additionally, the Internet also serves a crucial role when it comes to easy cooperation among employees in different nations. Nowadays, interactions via emails or social networking sites are almost as good as face-to-face meetings. In fact, we can instantly deliver a message to our colleagues, family members and friends only at the click of a mouse.
On the other hand, numerous drawbacks are found to be closely associated with excessive Internet use. The overdependence on virtual communication is the primary cause of the decline in social skills, which is highly likely to be detrimental to real relationships. It is widely acknowledged that Internet-related innovations have caused humans to become more isolated socially and deteriorate in interpersonal skills. Another foreseeable negative is that Internet addiction causes eyesight problems and migraine headaches. Moreover, people also suffer from metal illnesses from long-term Internet use. These days, it is not difficult for students to get access to the inappropriate websites which can spoil their students' minds.
In conclusion, the Internet is unquestionably a useful and powerful tool; however, it should be used moderately and appropriately to prevent regrettable incidents from happening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62416107383 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2504014644 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667785234899 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9218710176 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191008599788 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051788121518 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429082877926 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931129042624 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420200055361 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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