Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.
Do you agree or disagree?
There are number of people who believe that cooking and eating at home is beneficial for a person and family as a whole, rather than opting to eat out at cafes, canteens or restaurants. In my view, I strongly advocate point of eating at home with the family because of several reasons.
Firstly, among plethora of reasons as why one should cook and eat at home, the most impeccable is the hygiene of the food cooked and served at home. Doctors worldwide are emphasizing importance of home cooked cuisines because of its nutritional values, cleanliness, quality of ingredients and more importantly quality of water used. For instance, every year thousands of people in Pakistan hospitalized because of food poisoning due to eating out at unhygienic eateries. Recently, family of four members had lost their lives after consuming dinner at Karachi’s high-end prestigious restaurant. Forensic and investigation reports later revealed that, food poisoning was the cause of their death because they had consumed expired meat.
Another point to consider is that, there are fancy restaurants that mint large sums of money in the name of exotic food and ambiance, eating at home saves both time and hard-earned money. Cooking is art and cooking and eating with your family creates harmony and compounds happiness. It is an excellent form of socializing and interacting with all the family members. Additionally, People who are keen on improving their health and are fitness freaks are of the view that fitness starts from one’s kitchen; as it is only 30% exercise and whooping 70% diet.
In conclusion, one should adopt healthy eating practices and cooking at home and eating with family promotes hygiene, fitness and more importantly health family interaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79181390071 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.396802448 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358395817387 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139336648841 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108146465834 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250976991991 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782727785964 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.