The bar chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a bar chart illustrating the changes of 2 industries including IT industry and Service Industry in the UK over the period 8 years since 1992.
In general, it is evident that both the data on IT industry and Service industry was an upward trend. Besides, the figure for IT industry was generally higher than that of Service industry.
Concerning IT industry, the data made up over 6% at the beginning of the period before it increased steadily to over 8% until 1994. In next 6 years, there was a fluctuation and a dramatic growth to 12% in 1996. For the rest of the period, IT industry witnessed a quick rise to nearly 15% in the proportion.
Regarding Service industry, in the first 2 years, there was a slight soar of 2% and almost equal to the rate of IT industry about 7% in 1996 but the data just went up slowly to 8% until 2000, which was lower than a half of the proportion of GDP of Service industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... higher than that of Service industry. Concerning IT industry, the data made up...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, regarding, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41520467836 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54852700818 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0520182672 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.049264578683 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214268577023 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386178628461 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374970009791 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044802473712 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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