Nowadays, for many people, the Internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion about this trend?
Stepping into the century of cutting-edge technology, people are likely to transfer from reading books into using the Internet. In fact, it is highly debatable that this issue would bring pros or cons for the manner of local in the following years. This discussion with clarify to this problem before informing my own idea.
On the one hand, it is evident that an enormous number of seniors use hard-copy materials on the account that the book have mainstream and is checked carefully about content before publishing so they could sure about that. Moreover, reading paper-books could help keep calm and an increased of concentration, especially for the younger people should have this personality to gain successful hence they would be encouraged built this good habit by the older people. However, the main problem is if they just only read paper-books, they would find it uncomfortable on the account of bulky in order to bring everywhere.
On the other hand, the society networking is a win-win situation for both young people and seniors. Firstly, people could enjoy multi-function which contains watching films, playing games through Internet not only reading e-book that brings convention for human. With the cost of a book are tending to increase sharply, the tight-budget employees would not be able to buy it or waste time to find it in the bookshop instead of downloading and saving into their private phones. Besides, a person want to share good information they just spend 2 minutes to send it for others without meeting others to talk about that.
In conclusion, the majority of users support that the Internet might be an optimal solution and acceptable method as well as keep reading habit for every-age. However, the information, which should be controlled or remarked the copy-right, is posted in the social media. In my opinion, I embolden that the benefit of Internet ought to be a trendy over the world and promote all of generation approach that.
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Comments
The essay is 2 question form
The essay is 2 question form essay and therefore it should answer its questions which are
1. What will happen in the future
2. What do you think about this trend of replacing books with the internet?
Your essay discusses both sides of the topic but could not answer the questions asked.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07055214724 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72274645588 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585889570552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4874010074 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113481629848 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040611463599 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022827729866 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698913683183 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010680877498 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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