Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damage.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Shivani,
I have taken your notebook but unfortunately it got damaged. I apologised for that moreover I would tell the reason behind.
One of my fast friend had come to meet me at my home and she packed my things as we planned to go for outing with the group of school friends. Without my knowledge she had kept your notebook in my bagpack when my group went for river rafting all things got wet which was in the bag.I am fully responsible for the same.I should checked what she had kept in my stuff.
However, I assured you that I will fix this issue. I know you can understand the reason for the same so whatever has happened it totally done by fault. And you can trust me that I will give your material as you had given me.
Therefore, I will look after your reply.
Yours faithfully
Mahi Sethi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Shivani, I have taken your notebook but unfortuna...
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...oreover I would tell the reason behind. One of my fast friend had come to meet m...
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...d had come to meet me at my home and she packed my things as we planned to go for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...school friends. Without my knowledge she had kept your notebook in my bagpack whe...
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Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...all things got wet which was in the bag.I am fully responsible for the same.I sho...
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...bag.I am fully responsible for the same.I should checked what she had kept in my ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ecked what she had kept in my stuff. However, I assured you that I will fix ...
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... stuff. However, I assured you that I will fix this issue. I know you can un...
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...give your material as you had given me. Therefore, I will look after your reply....
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k after your reply. Yours faithfully Mahi Sethi
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...ly. Yours faithfully Mahi Sethi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43421052632 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29773916343 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2559770992 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190118601315 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792850423369 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327364137225 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102380187073 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480922198443 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.