In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as the family roles. What are the changes which have occured? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
It is an obvious trend of changing family structure and family roles in this contemporary society. I wholeheartedly believe that these significant changes have positive impacts on both personal and social perspectives.
Today’s society has experienced several major changes regarding family structure and family roles. The first prominent transformation is the awareness about women’s paramount role, as they are offered equal opportunities to pursue their career, in comparison with men’s role. As a result, more and more husbands help their wives to do the chores, which were usually considered as ‘women job’. Another change is that nuclear families have replaced for traditional families with more than two generations living together.
I advocate these changes because of its benefits towards individual and society as well. Firstly, dual-income families could have more money to finance their children’s education. As a result, youngsters could be trained to be well-rounded individuals, having essential qualifications to meet the high competitive labor market in the future. Secondly, a nuclear family with parents working means adolescents will be raised by the support of kindergartens and schools, where kids are required to be independent and socialize with others. It is no doubt that children will be taught some necessary living skills, such as: interpersonal skill, adaptability and willingness to explore the world, while parents are enabled to earn money.
In conclusion, the modern life has brought out some remarkable changes in terms of family structure and family roles, which derive positive effects on individual and community as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75697211155 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14909430972 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649402390438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2095207079 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330134312212 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132484783226 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103167837368 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229611533977 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074938502569 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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