With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people.
Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
According to contemporary world advancements in the present day health care, society has to look after the increasing number of senior citizens. However, in latter we can discuss and find a solution.
Firstly, there is not even an iota of doubt that modern world has saw great achievements in health protection. For instance, the up gradation in medical field has impact on society. Robotic equipment for surgeries and new machinery system has evolved within a generation in a decade. Although, there are repercussions which follows.It is felt that society is lagging behind in taking care of senior cities and their requirements with no monetary benefits or job opportunities they cannot lead a peaceful life.Measures are taken to solve this problem.
On the other hand, i am advocate about the fact that community can collaborate with governments which benefits the elderly people. Investing economy on residential buildings for them with amenities which support their lifestyle. Residential colonies with one big community for only senior people with recreational activities, health care protection services with lost. These things make older generations live happily in the community. Furthermore, job opportunities in financial field or consultancy field related by older generations.To delineate an example, developed countries like China , Japan have their elderly benefits with job opportunities. Also the concept of residency for senior people is on the go.
To close, Though there are improvements in this advanced world people tend to forget the effort behind the people who made this world to improve, so it's necessary to take care of the older generation for better community life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50763358779 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01490943519 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629770992366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6158806005 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246152234084 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792481672625 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546394645874 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137071280585 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044466173529 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.