Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by sadegh871 on Fri, 12/21/2018 - 12:01

Workers play an important role in each society. One of the main challenges for employers is to make their employees satisfied with their work. Now, the question is whether workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. I definitely agree with the statement and will try to elaborate on my opinion through the following paragraphs.

First, it goes without saying that doing the same job all day is boring for everyone. As human beings, all of us prefer to do different tasks instead of doing just a similar work. When we try various activities, not only it will not be a boring job, but also we learn new things that is valuable for our life. Through doing different tasks, we also may meet new people and perhaps making new friends. On the other hand, doing just a same activity make us to feel sleepy. I remember that one of my secondary school friends found a job after he was graduated. He worked as a simple worker in a bakery, and his work was to prepare the flour for the breads. After a while I saw him and found that he is not as energetic as before. When I asked about the reason, he explained his job and I inferred that his boring job had made him such a tired boy.

Second, as I mentioned earlier, doing different activities help us to learn new things. Consequently, it will develop our brain and we can be prepared for the other challenges that we may confront with in our life. For example, someone that his job is to do various things such as writing an email, negotiation with others, finding different vendors of a product, and compare that products with each other, try to solve different type of problems that will resulted in development of his mind.

In conclusion, doing various tasks is very helpful for workers, because it would not be a kind of boring job, and it also help them to develop their mind that consequently help them to be prepared for the upcoming problems in their life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ot be a kind of boring job, and it also help them to develop their mind that consequ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52876712329 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44793255702 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484931506849 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3749365567 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2352941176 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331618409568 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109092102467 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159475831333 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219999443289 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17667927204 0.0645574589148 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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