bank letter
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to issue a new debit card as advised by your customer care department. My name is Bob Simmons and I hold a savings account 7586JDT9230530 with your prestigious bank.
The savings account was opened last year by my employer. To elucidate the electronic chip of my debit card has gone faulty and I am not able to withdraw money. I had requested your customer care to process the same over the call but they specifically instructed me to write a letter requesting for it as they advised that such requests cannot be completed over the phone unless they have a written instruction from the account holder.
On the contrary, I would like to highlight that I have only one bank account and it is becoming increasingly difficult to manage without cash so I would ask you to process my request and send a new debit card to my postal address.
I look forward to your immediate help on the same.
Yours sincerely
bob
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...6JDT9230530 with your prestigious bank. The savings account was opened last year...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iate help on the same. Yours sincerely bob
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63372093023 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69674076666 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2150827675 44.8134815571 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132682562936 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446659726092 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480506894813 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785158145116 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713657862728 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.