The environment problems facing today’s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often claimed that our environment is affected so adversely that each person find it impossible to do something to change this situation and it is the responsibility of the government. Nevertheless, while I agree the government has to take proactive measures with the aim of reducing the damage being done to our planet, I disagree that there is nothing the residents can do to make it better.
First and foremost, it is crucial for the government accompanied by companies or international organizations to make co- ordinated efforts to curb the global environmental deterioration. Initially, they need to utilize alternative resources instead of natural sources like fossil fuels which can make a great contribution to our polluted environment. New environmentally friendly sources of energy for vehicles are definitely being developed with a view to control the alarming rate of carbon footprints as well as harmful smoke in the air. Besides that, strict restrictions along with laws should be imposed so as to diminish emissions of pollutants and thorough tests need to be placed on the process of waste treatment before being dumped directly into the environment. Last but not least, vest tracts of land are allocated for wildlife conservation, which can help a plethora of endangered species spared the fate of extinction.
However, I wholeheartedly believe that the most productive method is to nurture the individual’s awareness. Unless all citizens in the world are fully conscious of the gravity of the situation ecological degradation which has been happening in their own countries can never be halted. It is a well – known fact that people always expect too much from our government, scientists and engineers while, in the mean time plenty of factories and households have dumped an enormous amount of toxic waste into the rivers, lakes, ocean and litter the streets everywhere. As a consequence, raising human’s understanding plays the most integral part in the process of reducing environmental pollution. The educational system have to make a great change to start developing everyone’s realisation especially children in primary and secondary schools that each of our activity can have a wide influence on our future life. The most essential obligation is to instill the urgent need of taking care of our polluted environment into the psyche of each and every member of the society. The great effort that the government and big companies make will be worthless if we are not capable of changing people’s mind.
To sum up, it is crucial for everyone to stop their destructive behaviors to the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 611, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...urture the individual's awareness. Unless all citizens in the world are fully con...
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Line 3, column 1087, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f each and every member of the society. The great effort that the government and bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, while, as to, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28132387707 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19367931169 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583924349882 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7101701988 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.933333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287019023217 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853958837507 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521643631548 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154728718772 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557440291786 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.