some culture old people is more valued while others cultures youth is more valued

Essay topics:

some culture old people is more valued while others cultures youth is more valued

every age has own experience .some region senior people get more preferenced as juxtaposed to young howeover some cultures youth are more valued .my crumb of the writing i will discuss both views with my opinion.
To embark with Old people are more experienced and they know about Wht is right and wrong they know about their moral value as well as their culture and customes.moreover senior people are the backbone of the family beacause they have power to joined all family together paradigmatically according to newspaper survey those homes have old people in that area quarrels are less
Other side youngsters also more valuable because they know about current values and technology as well as they have a creative ideas rather than orthodox more over new generation are more knowledgable

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
every age has own experience .some region sen...
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Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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every age has own experience .some region senior people get more prefe...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cultures'' or 'culture's'?
Suggestion: cultures'; culture's
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...over some cultures youth are more valued .my crumb of the writing i will discuss b...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re more valued .my crumb of the writing i will discuss both views with my opinion...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'idea'?
Suggestion: idea
...hnology as well as they have a creative ideas rather than orthodox more over new gene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 131.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06870229008 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68556952367 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687022900763 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.0 49.4020404114 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 332.0 106.682146367 311% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403293809723 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.319756009563 0.084324248473 379% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389465297414 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265602736721 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661979048702 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.2 13.0946893788 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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