Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Television has a plethora of positive and negative effects on people’s life, but I agree with that TV makes problems in association with communication among friends and family. I feel this way for 2 reason, which I explore in the following essay.
In the first place, TV can make free times of some people are spent just for watching the TV programs and makes them addict to see it. Some of TV programs are so attractive for people, who like these programs, as a result they prefer watching TV instead of communicating with their families or friends at the same time. My sister is a great example of this. She sits in front of the TV from the early morning till evening over the weekends. She don’t spend time with her family or even her friend and because of this, her relationship with her friends is close to break. Also, her own family are worried about her because she don’t attend in family meeting.
Secondly, family members are sometimes in struggle when everyone wants to watch her or his own favorite programs. It can cause argue among a family and destroyed their relationship for a while. By mention to my sister family, they usually have this problem because my sister is a TV addict and don’t allow other family members interrupt her selected program and watch their own ones. An instance of my sister situation clearly illustrate why i think this way.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that despite the positive effects of TV on people’s lifestyle, it can be harmful for communication among friends and family. This is because, some people use TV as an alternative for a relationship with friends and family, and because family members sometimes can put in trouble when they want to watch different programs simultaneously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sister situation clearly illustrate why i think this way. In conclusion, I str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76881549108 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528239202658 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9134834867 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148202098173 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060616321873 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661302337647 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126193987384 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861714285178 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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