Adams Maryam:
A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exerciseand avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Ade-Akin:
Good diet, exercise and stress management are common characteristics of an healthy person. There are many other ways people can stay healthy which includes going on hiking trips, having regular check ups and getting regular massage. These methods will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, people can stay fit by going on regular hiking trips. Visits to the seaside, mountains and remote locations allow people explore the environment and these allow them the opportunity to burn calories and stay fit. For instance, a man who regularly spends his leisure time at home watching TV when compared to another who spends his time going to new places cannot be said to be fit. Exploring new areas helps in keeping one fit.
Secondly, regular medical check ups in the hospital ensures we have healthy status. In other words, check ups most times show issues with the body like high blood pressure, low blood pressure and cancer. For example, a renowned Nigerian goal keeper was diagnosed of cancer though a random check up which ensured be began treatment and beat the illness before it became terminal.
Lastly, an unorthodox way for people to stay fit is through massage. The various massages available today like the Nuhu and deep tissue massage helps with managing stress which in turn leads to improved wellbeing. For example, most Nigerian men albeit secretly incorporate massage into their weekend routine which help relieve stress from the weeks activities.
In conclusion, people can stay healthy by engaging in hiking, going for regular check ups and getting massages.regularly.
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, isa waste of money. Governments must invest this money inpublic services instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Competitiveness among high school students should beencouraged. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- In order to study at the university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free to everyone To what extent do u agree or disagree 79
- Adams Maryam:A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exerciseand avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 67
- Adams Maryam:A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exerciseand avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26254826255 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57576130392 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1564747974 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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