In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?!
In some parts of the world, many youngsters are urged to take a gap year off to work and study before they start a tertiary study. This essay will illustrate both the benefits and drawbacks of taking a gap year.
There are many advantages to taking a break after high school. To begin with, a preference to take a year off can lead to better real-life experience as well as career choices. For instance, during that time students can travel to many of places around the world; as a result, this would help them widen their horizons, experience various cultures and expand their knowledge about many of different areas. Moreover, working during that time is also chosen to do by many young people. This would help them showcase their skills and gain a range of working experience that may be useful for their future study. Also, they may find it easier to choose a right career path.
However, for every positive, there is a negative, the flip side of studying after a year off is being a year behind academically. That means starting one’s university program a year later and graduating a year later than other one’s peers. Additionally, some scholarships, for instance, do not allow deterring so the decision of taking a gap year might be at the loss of a scholarship. Thus, the disadvantages of a gap year need to be weighed up against the advantages.
To sum up, although taking a gap year seems to do wonders for students’ personal and professional development, it might cause to delay academic progress by one year. Students should consider both of views before making a decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90510948905 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74683471733 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1817192579 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21577216917 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741827220721 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405298788619 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122499402404 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336885579104 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.