Describe a performer, an actor or a musician, etc. that you think is great. Please give specific reasons why you think he/she is a great performer.
Over past few decades, loads of changes have happened for globe s’cinema and theater .If I want to address the question, without a no doubt I will introduce one of the fames actors in the cross the word that so-called mesi who recently has high name in terms of anything. Thus, I would present a couple of underlying reasons for my choice .
To come straight to the point, it goes without saying that mess as a renewed person in the world needs more attention due to the wide- range of principal reasons.I have a lot to say about the desirability of this guy that he not only is a safosticatd football player but also does a lot to foster a great sense of humanity and altruism ,which is so rewarding.L et clarified with a personal experience, that I cannot remember vividly but if my mind serves me right it was many years ago when I used to head to university and one of those days I bacome familiar with this one by means of mass media .to cut a loge story short ,he is used to expending a plenty of his time at nersiong houses , deprived areas , and so forth .Simply put , he minds wether people in the cross the work struggle to make a living and living in the breadline or not ,in fact , he give others a help either in terms of financial problems like proving a house or psychologically.
In addition,it is conspicuous that he has been idle actor and candy his vocation like back of his hand .Simply put , if he did not become an actor, deprived ones who are needy in terms of anythings would not indulging their life. I assume he has had a tendency so as to threacher his precious life that is goodwill of god rathe than others actor wasting their cash lavishly or on the other hand , massing a plenty of material possessions .
To sum up, considering the point above mentioned, the most retional conclusion to be drawn is that have deeply-held belief; although others actors can be good and play at heart, ‘mesi ‘more and more need to be admired as a whole.
- Students in a university club want to help others but they can only choose one project a year which one of the following is the best A Help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics B Help people who cannot afford to build or 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor. 85
- Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to succeed at college or university؟Tutors in university.The encouragement from family and friends.High-quality education from high school. 73
- Many schools do not allow students to take their laptop computers into the classroom. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having laptop computers in the classroom? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion 78
- are you agree or disagree with this statement successful people try new things and take a risks rather than doing what they really know about that and how to do well 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, as to, in addition, in fact, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46280991736 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6054862582 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.1344086022 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 287.088836425 48.9658058833 586% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.0 100.406767564 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 20.6045352989 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 5.45110844103 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.5376344086 560% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880577783174 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413340116753 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024905034885 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459596400874 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256482908619 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 11.7677419355 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.5 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 10.1575268817 239% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.48 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.0537634409 259% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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