Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The advantages and disadvantages of economic growth have been considered one of the most concerning issues worldwide recently. Some people contend that it is the only solution for hunger and poverty; however, some argue that the development of economies should be stopped since it is destroying our environment. In my opinion, I do support the latter view because of several reasons.
On the one hand, people who agree that the progress of economic growth is solely the way to help the poor out of poverty have a primary argument. Only the development of economies in developing countries can help reduce poverty and hunger. Big companies which hire millions of workers provide them with basic needs of life; therefore, they are able to get out of starving conditions and support themselves and their families as well. However, in industrialized nations, hardly do big corporations trickle down the profit to their lowest-level employees. As a result, the gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider.
On the other hand, it is true that economic growth should be stopped due to the fact that it is severely damaging the environment. Firstly, factories cause a lot of pollution to nature. Numerous rivers and oceans are poisoned by industrial waste, which results in the death of millions of fish and marine animals. Moreover, deforestation destroys a large area of tropical rainforest. Consequently, there are more and more natural disasters like soil erosion, storm, flooding that human beings have to suffer. Secondly, natural resources are coming to an end since fossil fuels, which providing energy for industrialization, are being used continuously. Therefore, global warming, climate change and the rise of sea levels are undeniable consequences, which cause thousands of people homeless in coastal areas.
From all the above-mentioned, economic growth is one of the solutions for tackling poverty issues; however, it should be seriously restricted due to its detrimental effects on the environment. People should develop and apply reusable resources widely to provide enough energy for both domestic and industrial purposes without damaging nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39705882353 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98325633144 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1159217524 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.941176471 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213473478495 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585889368966 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630589879449 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132631995361 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488945092028 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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