There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is a form of art and cultural activity. There are different genres of music classical, folk, contemporary, psychedelic, metallic etc. Despite the cultural variation one thing that is common in every music is that it connects people. Due to technological advancement reach of this art has become international. Now, the question arises does the traditional music adds more value to a person’s life than international music? Let us find the answer to these questions one by one.
First of all, music is an essential part of our lives. It is a proven fact that music not only soothes our mood but also has the capability to improve our health. Plus, irrespective of language each of us enjoys good music without understanding a word of it. It creates an ambiance and adds experience to the event. Can a drama be imagined without background music? I think no.
Further, it increases focus by improving brain functioning. Also, it enhances emotions. During an independent study, it was discovered that when a cow was milked while it was listening to the radio the yield was better than ever before.
Now let us discuss the second question, benefits of folk music over international music. To explain, classical music unites countrymen. During fights for freedom, leaders of the nation used music to bring a sense of unity in their countrymen. To explain further, can an independence day function be imagined without a national anthem or national song. Also, it represents the tradition of a country. However, youth nowadays prefers to hear music like rap and hip-hop. They should not be looked down but at the same time should be informed about the importance of traditional music.
Conclusively, it can be summed up that music is an integral part of humans and we should not underestimate the value of classical music. At the same time, we can not deny the inclination of youth towards international music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'add'?
Suggestion: add
...stion arises does the traditional music adds more value to a person's life than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95152899994 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0329701254 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9166666667 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.20833333333 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401743409638 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113406380519 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960096032031 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219110275927 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108892790492 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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