Fast food has become a part of our society. What is the impact of fast food on human life?
Fast food chain boomed in twenty first century quite rapidly. We can find multiple brands of fast food in our society and has influenced many people in their daily diet. I think the fast food is degrading human health and increasing the pollution.
First, fast food is pre-cooked meals and contains very less dietary value. Many people think that eating fast food saves their time. Waiting time for food is much reduced unlike other conventional restaurant. Since the fast food is unhealthy it is increasing fat people in society. As a research done by Standford University, in last decades, the percentage of obese people has increased by 25%. Therefore I think, fast food has negative impact on people's heath.
Second, the fast food outlets are adding up more pollution to the environment. Many self-service branches are increasing in market and neighbourhood. These food stalls has increased litter in surrounding because these branches have their eating space in open area and leave customer to throw wrappers and leftover in unmanaged way. That is why I believe these food restaurants have adverse effect on environment.
To conclude, these fast food companies have adverse effect on people's health and environment. These kind of food shops should be reduced and government should bring up strict policy in serving healthy foods to public citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, therefore, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22374429224 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66273870964 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6047816354 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2666666667 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398603178971 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16142421623 0.0925447433944 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947546491574 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260368988059 0.151781067708 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892069867052 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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