Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
It is inherent to technology to make the lives of its users easy. Used properly, technology offers numerous advantages as opposed to the few instances in which it might deem unnecessary.
Most importantly, integrating technology saves time. From daily mundane chores to repetitive industrial processes, technology cuts down on the steps required to achieve end results. The time saved by an automatic washing machine may be used for leisure reading. Industries are able to offer low prices on hard to make items as they are able to produce in bulk that which would otherwise take months to make.
Secondly, the effort required to perform complicated tasks is reduced by technological intervention. Reading a map while driving has been replaced by audio instructions from a mobile phone. Now it is effortless to carry hundreds of books in the palm of ones hand. Advances in optics and robotics have allowed for precision surgeries to be performed with relative ease.
However, everyone may not be comfortable with using technology to thier advantage. Older generations may not be tech sauvvy enough to reach thier desired end result.
With all this time and effrot that is saved, mankind has the oppurtunity to innovate further and continue to make their lives easier.
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- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live then Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mi 63
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, second, secondly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21359223301 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83030940601 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684466019417 0.4932671777 139% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2033760522 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6153846154 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.062131812968 0.243740707755 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217673966725 0.0831039109588 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355610296751 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0371357223087 0.150359130593 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260036905293 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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