The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
The key characteristic one needs, regardless of his own capabilities or talent, in life to be happy is the the ability to able to accurately gauge his own his own capabilities. To be able to gauge one’s own capabilities on must have sufficient self-knowledge. The key to having self-knowledge is by trying to travel through unchartered territory i.e. rejecting what you're familiar with. I strongly agree with the given prompt that the first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar. I strongly agree with it for the following two reasons.
Most people are aware of their characteristics that make them affable or set them apart as their kin or milieu might regularly compliment the on it. They might also be biased in their compliments or maybe looking foryou to compliment them back, as social constructs expects you to. Long-winded exposure to hte same people and same social setting can paint a obscure image of yourself to you in your head and reinforces the positive aspects of you with your negative qualities being masked behind a curtain of niceness. So to unfold that curtain one must regularly try to get exposure with unfamiliar situation. It can be through travelling or meeting new people.
Humans has a proclivity for choosing comfort. Comfort is every situation which we are familiar with, where things go according to plan, where people behave as expected and the mind is at ease. To strabble that complacency and endure discomfort in many forms to be abe to test ownes own mettle we have to reject situations we are familiar with.
Some might feel it is possible to gain self-knowledge from familiar situations as the way we behave is representative of we who we are. But this view flawed as it ignore the tendency ost of us have to behave awkwardly in unknown or unfamiliar situation. Hence, first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ities or talent, in life to be happy is the the ability to able to accurately gauge his...
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Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ities or talent, in life to be happy is the the ability to able to accurately gauge his...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'his own'.
Suggestion: his own
...the ability to able to accurately gauge his own his own capabilities. To be able to gauge one&a...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...chartered territory i.e. rejecting what youre familiar with. I strongly agree with th...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eople and same social setting can paint a obscure image of yourself to you in you...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to comfort'
Suggestion: to comfort
.... Humans has a proclivity for choosing comfort. Comfort is every situation which we ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94339622642 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02914263034 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3366940015 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20826365813 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719065948315 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754021259685 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108732916613 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326746836037 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.