Some people that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Over the years, more and more people acquire the willing to communicate and discover the world through journeys and travels. In these travels, what kind of behaviour would be characterized as appropriate and acceptable? should the visitors conform to local habits or should the host country be more open to cultural differences?
To begin with, this matter, undoubtedly, deals with controversy. On a certain degree, there are people who declare that visitors to foreign countries should follow the customs and behaviour of the locals. And why this should not be the case? tourists travel far away from their countries in order to discover new places, civilizations and cultures. they should be ready to conform to the established regulations which are imposed either by law or the religion system. In fact, there are countries across the globe which are led by strict regulations especially on religious matters such as Konstantinoupoli. citizens there are accustomed to a very specific way of life, which entails a strong belief to their God. they abruptly stop everything they do, including their work, approximately three times a day, when Imamis calls all people to pray to Allah. tourists are obliged to respect and follow and respect these customs. In a different case, it is quite possible to deal with their laws.
On the opposing side, there are those who confront this argument by claiming that technical borders in someone’s behaviour should not be welcomed. The country that accepts tourists worldwide should be ready to allow and accept cultural differences. people, either those who visit or host foreign citizens, should expand their horizons and permit new ideas and way of thinking insert their state of mind. In addition, hosts should remember that visitors may not be aware of their culture. As a result, this fact might cause errors or phenomenical inappropriate behaviour on behalf of the visitors. that is the main reason why host countries is necessary to tolerate with unpleasant incidents.
Taking everything into consideration, I am in favor of visitors respecting and following some other country’s laws, religion and customs, without, of course, losing their own cultural identity. Above all. we are all humans and equality should be an integral part of our lives. we should all remember that racism does not belong to mindful human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in addition, in fact, kind of, of course, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26701570681 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82820905896 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7360910193 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305123529721 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817923024601 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822791838247 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186023761881 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213205792203 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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