Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museums, town halls and sporting
facilities is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both
views and give your own opinion.
Public buildings like museums, town halls and sporting facilities are very important for flourishing countries. And maintainance of those building are as equal as construction of the same. Some people belive that building the fresh public buildings are important than modernizing the older ones, while others disapprove. In my opinion both carry it's own advantages and disadvantages, so i shall put forth my arguments to support my opinion.
Old public buildings have more popularity and it illustrates the building construction talents of the
country. If the older building are getting renovated, then it is not only that we are saving the ancient items in that building, also we are preserving the tradition buildings. Despite the fact that saving traditional way of building, it has few drawbacks. The space of the entire building will be less as it was constructed many years ago. For an example, if number of items in the museum get increased then, it is not possible to include those items into the older museum, Since there is not enough space available in it. Particularly the renovation of the building costs more than the constructing new one.
On contrary, Constructing newer building will have a lot of advantages compare to renovating the older one. For people satisfaction and convenience, builder can construct a building with all amenties.like Vehicle parking. Because most of Older buildings did not construct with the parking areas.And also increase the space of the building also easy in newer buildings compare to older one.Eventually, Adding new gadgets to the building will attract more people to come and use it.
For instance new museums are including voice explanation of the particular item and including security gadgets for the security of the building.
To conclude that, Considering the cost of the construction and to avail new gadgets for the visitors, Newer building is very easy to construct and government could spend that money in constructing more new buildings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28660436137 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98111146268 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517133956386 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2200481582 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296904138148 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112313190593 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930000688575 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156154581432 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105936738694 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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