Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like.
Is it good for children?
Compering to last few decades, the method of bringing up children has changes fundamentally as parents become less tough and more flexible. Modern development is a main contributor to this issue that cause parent provide children with any things they ask. It seems that this change brings a new set of negative consequence.
The first and the main consideration is about the impact of this method on personality of children. Having an easy and constant access to whatever they want, result in significant dependency on their parent. Besides, they would not be able to build their character and promote their confidence. In contrast, those children that learn to set goals and make effort to thrive them are more self-made and self-directed. Reports claim that the “ Can-Do” approach is very popular among this group of people, whilst those children who have nurtured by available parents are not as independent as the other ones.
Despite the fact that flexible family upbringing result in reducing the age gap effects, it is true to say that many psychological disorders are because of a weak and inappropriate method. As an outstanding instance, poor communication and social skills can be mentioned. When children obtained their need without making any efforts, they would be expected that their peers or their colleague provide them whenever they ask and when they are rejected, they might feel some inefficiency such as depression, stress or sense of loneliness.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems that the detrimental effect of this upbringing method would outweigh the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not as independent as the other ones. Despite the fact that flexible family up...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, in contrast, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.328125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91337123168 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7369974413 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242873120655 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778877963023 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675471638846 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133169358431 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590394429899 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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