Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a contentious issue regarding whether museum and other art organization should place their emphasis on the internal artworks or they should expand their boundary and exhibit external works. Although there is some truth to the first group idea, but it is true to say that art and cultural activities should not restricted to local works and I think there should be some separate parts for international works because in my idea, art and cultural activities are the best way to create a community sense among people and also, to improve the creativity in young generations.
To being with, it should be stuck in the mind that from the ancient years to now, humans use their imagination power to create different type of art. To illustrate, painting on the walls in caves in the medieval era, was the main method to write the history. The present culture of each nation include these features and contain many important and interesting data. According to the latest research, people from around the world are interested to share and engaged in other cultures and the found it as a best way to bring people close to each other and promote the sense of humanity and community.
On the other hand, when the art galleries exhibit the work of foreign artists from other countries, they provide people with the opportunity to be familiar with a variety forms of art which bring a new set of positive consequences. The main one would be increasing the information about other nations, their customs, their beliefs and their religious. The second one is the positive effects on creativity of the youths. It is a good way to broaden their mind and extent their outlook.
In conclusion, in my point of view, museum and art centers should focus on both internal and external artworks from artists from all around the world because it makes people to feel more close to each other and increase interpersonal interaction among people which result in more humanity bonding. Also, it is an effective way to improve creativity and thinking out-of-box skills. Given this situation, I tend to believe that museum should focus on both native and foreign artworks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95355191257 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59257801776 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505464480874 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9173122404 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.461538462 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1538461538 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231154853206 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706923209301 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592493662669 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140888626623 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361407632611 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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