Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Staying in abroad is popularing among youth. In order to get higher living standards and more salaries, people went out from their native countries. This trend is striking to all levels of citizens in underdeveloped and developing countries. It is often debated between pros and cons in political bodies. I am personally agree the view that living in a different language speak country can cause social problems.
Those who support the idea that staying in another country can get many experiences presents a number of reasons to justify their opinion. The most effective way to teach foreign language and the culture of the tribe is to live with the ethnics what you would like to attain. Living in different cultures and religious can make you a smart person. The various experiences and challenges can shape you to be a stronger one.
However, those against the above idea have their respective points as well. Although, someone who is fluent in foreign language, they cannot know the usage of idioms. Misunderstanding in communication can lead to the social problems. Only one language is the mother tongue of biliguals and he/she cannot examine the depth and meaning of words as native know. Furthermore, culture adaption and weather changes can feel you the depression.
To sum up, being an isolation always tend to lonliness. The person who feel insecure for long can suffer the problems both for mentally and physically. Hence, you get more benefits by staying abroad but if you have to face the above mentioned points, you should not stay and live in abroad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Line 4, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you should not stay and live in abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00381679389 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67217281368 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7329910571 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1176470588 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325914621056 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890607656289 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938600474266 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178061983639 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327522050232 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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