Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the number of visitors come to museums is obviously decrease than the people who go to theme parks. Most of the museums are facing difficulties in the income and thus charging the more entrance fees than zoos/playgrounds. I personally disagree with the view that the public need to pay the fee to tour around in the museums.
Those in favour of the view that museums should charge for admission present a number of points to support their idea. By the human nature, if people get free for something, they so not pay attention on it. Museums are carrying the historical/cultural context and citizens should keep the biography of their ancestors. Money is the primary factor to run everything and if the museums do not charge the entry fee, they will be closed in very short time.
However, whose oppose the above idea have their respective points as well. Today in busy life, people do not prefer to waste their time on unnecessary things. Technology is developed and we can know easily what we want from sitting at home through screens. The museums do not engage the professions from related fields and no one in museums cannot explain more briefly than internet. By my experience, I went to Yangon National Museum with my Vietnamese friend and the staffs gave recorders what can explain the displays in the museum. There were more charges for the devices fee. The explanation from the gadget was very boring and after the tour, I decided not to go again to any kind of museums in my life.
To sum up, the rate of visitors is very few for museums and if the museum charges admission fees, people will not happy to waste their time in museums. Thus, disadvantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...f visitors come to museums is obviously decrease than the people who go to theme parks. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, if, so, thus, well, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76567656766 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63788258937 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6127659562 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393381676428 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137578840396 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139628002615 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270632055511 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145140394684 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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