Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own,
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some argue that kids should be inspired by their parents to take part in organized group activities, while others believe that children should learn how to work by of themselves. It is agreed that while kids should be able to take care of themselves, I believe that kids could improve their personality in many ways by taking part in group activities. This essay will first discuss the consequences of not take part in any group, and then discuss the personal improvement of group activities.
As living in modern society, parents have a very tight schedule in their own lives, and they could not focus on their offspring and allow them to do what they like to do. As a result, kids always found in front of computer or television. However, kids can gain lots of knowledge from these mediums, but every kid is not aware of what to do, and they found themselves boring and free. Moreover, after sitting for a long time, children found less physically active and get obesity issues. For instance, according to the survey of Indian child club, kids who are not well cared by their parents and free to do what they like to do are 70% less active than kids who do group activities.
Alternatively, kids group activities offer an opportunity to learn and explore essential skills for life from the group as well as a group organizer. Specifically, children can learn communication, discipline as well as improve their skill to work in a team which is beneficial in their future career. Moreover, kids get a platform to share their creative ideas and achieve inspiration from the group, that perform a vital role in once progression. For example, Brisbane public school released its survey that kids who got more support, observation, and appreciation on their actions are performed progressively better in their lives.
In conclusion, the better way to train youngster’s mind is to allow them to do an organized activity and not sit by himself and do what he/she likes to do.
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- Many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? 73
- Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own,Discuss both these views and give your 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85840707965 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75373748005 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.4143787921 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302406042316 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117448153227 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777393051972 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169418830573 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970418177251 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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