The world natural resources are being consumed at an over-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
It is true that the world is facing to the problem of the over consumption of natural resources. This issue led to some dangerous consequences but some steps should be taken to tackle this situation.
There are two main major dangers from this over consumption. The first one is the dependence on fossil fuel are increasing significantly. These resources are not renewable so one day all of them will totally disappear. Moreover, the scarcity of some natural resources will have some impacts on society if human just relies on them. For example, the unemployed rate will grow because the factories are closed due to lack of energy. The second danger is the problems which involve in serious environmental issues. It is clear that the more these unsustainable resources are used, the worse environment is. In some countries, air pollution became a serious problem. This situation stems from factories’ emission as well as human daily activities.
However, some things should be done to alleviate this situation. Firstly, the government should provide more budgets to invest for studies to find out alternative energies which are suitable for each particular country. For example, nations facing to the beach should make use of the tidal power or wave energy to replace the fossil fuel. Secondly, simultaneously, the authorities should impose and adopt some laws to save environment like raising the fuel price and taxes. For instance, if the factories are charged more than they used to be, they will definitely try to take advantages from other renewable energy or install air and waste treatment systems.
In conclusion, the trend of the over consumption of natural resources will result in dangerous issues and the government should do some things to address this situation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84065765933 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5026424602 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224442923948 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072158542439 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606563486029 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166150648503 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611415417624 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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