as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea that, besides generating money, firms should also have public responsibilities remains a source of controversy. Although there are reasons to justify, I agree with that thought.
On the one hand, it is so clear that if making money is focused as the top priority at companies, it will bring benefits for society. Firstly, the more profits enterprises earns, the more taxes the government can receive. Consequently, the facilities such as schools, hospitals and roads will be concerned to built and reconstruct. Secondly, by earning huge profits, firms can have more capital to broaden their business. Therefore, the citizens can approach to good job opportunities and rise their living standards.
n the other hand, these companies also need to be responsible for the society. It can not be deny that environment has been effected by their activities. Serious environmental problems like global warming or air pollution will be controlled if these enterprises installs waste treatment systems instead of discharging chemical wastes. Another reason is that businesses should help those who are less fortune, since they have money to do so. For instance, huge firms always have enhanced their public images through compaigns of running charitable programs and giving scholarships for the poor people and students.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I believe that though making money is the fundamental principle for each companies, they should reflect on their social responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
...ies and rise their living standards. n the other hand, these companies also ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51072961373 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00776010719 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669527896996 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4854478475 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7692307692 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179334256068 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552835094085 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589188496683 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113016585043 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038211248652 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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