"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">I completely agree with the above statement that profit hungry corporations interfere with the general welfare of the nation. Profitable corporations always find ways to maximize their profit and to do so they become immune to their employees' problems. This creates a big rift between the administration and the employees which in turn affects the nation.
Firstly corporations always try to find suitable candidates with low salary. As job market is not good in most countries qualified candidates are bound to take up jobs with low salary. As candidates know their value and that they worth much more they don't become happy to get jobs.
Therefore they don't put as much effort to their jobs knowing that their work won't be valued properly and become depressed. So their mental health is severely affected.
Another common thing that these profitable corporations do is they don't give enough holidays to their employees. All the big corporations make their employees work all year round other than the religious holidays. Therefore employees get a feeling that the company they are working in are not concerned about their welfare. They lose respect for the administration and don't become motivated to give their 100% in their work
These profitable corporations also set tight rules for the employees to follow during office hours. Employees are not given the freedom to choose their lunch hour, recreation time, entry and exit time etc. Hence employees might feel offended and can develop hatred towards their boss or administration
Obviously a corporation will always to maximize its profit at any cost. But the most important thing that they fail to understand is that if they think about employees' welfare then employees will do anything for companies' profits. As there are a lot of job workers in a country this step will also benefit the nation.</span><br>
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- Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish. 50
- "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples f 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2908496732 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96462872085 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.24259528 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129599096002 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497051573984 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607583326197 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748019514222 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800869794573 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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