Today, the younger and older generation are in the same work place. Is this more an advantage or more disadvantage.
In this era of modern science and technology, health care sector has grown tremendously as a result the life span of an individual has also increased considerably. The number of old age people are increasing, although this may have few negative impact but positive outcome that can be derived from senior citizen is much more.
Its is believed that there are several drawback for greying society, first of all the cost to the Government will increase rapidly on account of subsidiary pricing for senior citizens. For instance Pension, Bus and railway Concession, where the cost will be borne by Government and resultant the Government recovers the same from General public in the form of Tax. Secondly there will be hit on employment rotation, freshers find it difficult to get the job as the employer looks for experienced and knowledgeable person. Thirdly, the productivity and outcome of the senior citizens will be lower and low adaptability to constant changes.
On the contrary few consider that senior citizen are true asset and guiding angel for the society. The expertise and subject knowledge gained from them shall be used and passed on to next generation for the better results and understanding. Older generation are good in predicting the future and its consequence of the actions. They shall play a vital role in the management of the several organisation, committees. They also take the chair in taking several corporate decision which are complex in structure. As per the recent survey about 70% of Fortune 500 Companies management consist of people who are above 65 years age. They have a vital role in the development and growth of the country and economy.
In conclusion, although there are several disadvantage associated with older generation, the benefits and moral attitude has a significant positive impact on today society. Hence its always advisable to work in mixed environment.
- Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
- Computer techniques has become cheap and easy to acess, young adults will work from home and children will study from home. Do you think it is a positive or negative change. 78
- People doing dangerous sports like bungee jumping and scuba diving should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their live people.Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Sugar consumption is too harmful Some say it is governments responsibility to limit sugar intake while others say it 039 s individual who are responsible Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun drawback seems to be countable; consider using: 'several drawbacks'.
Suggestion: several drawbacks
...more. Its is believed that there are several drawback for greying society, first of all the c...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the cost will be borne by Government and resultant the Government recovers the sa...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: Public
...t the Government recovers the same from General public in the form of Tax. Secondly there will...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organisation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several organisations'.
Suggestion: several organisations
...y a vital role in the management of the several organisation, committees. They also take the chair i...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecision which are complex in structure. As per the recent survey about 70% of Fort...
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Line 8, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'several disadvantages'.
Suggestion: several disadvantages
... In conclusion, although there are several disadvantage associated with older generation, the b...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...icant positive impact on today society. Hence its always advisable to work in mixed e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18543046358 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87066805038 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4002820069 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10579216387 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303614812678 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376278640876 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665984346586 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426032224912 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.