Write a letter to the airline. In this letter
- describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight
- explain how missing the flight affected you
- make it clear what you would like the airline to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you of a problem which happened at the airport due to which I missed my flight from Singapore to Bangkok. Let me elucidate further.
It was last week when I was supposed to board the flight from Singapore international airport at 2 pm but when I reached the airport the flight has already departed. I checked with the local representatives of your airlines and they explained to me that the ticket issued me had some typographical error as the flight scheduled departure was at 2 am. As you are aware that I travel regularly for this route for business purposes thus missing this flight has impacted several of my meetings with my clients and subsequently my business transactions.
Since this incident has happened simply due to the gross negligence of your administrative staff so I would request your airlines to airfare in my bank account.
I look forward to your response and immediate action to resolve this issue.
Yours Sincerely Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...subsequently my business transactions. Since this incident has happened simply ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89865736728 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.034972216 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199806858139 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070354733121 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614548164682 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109798958751 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617503612541 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.