In many countries, more money is spent on transport system in the cities. In contrast, very little is spent in rural areas.
What are the effect of this and What can be done to solve this problem.
Improving transport will reduce the traffic in many cities, hence, many governments spent huge money in bring latest technologies to make easy mobility for urban people. On the flips side, some people assume development in rural areas are at very slow pace, which affects the living standards of many villagers. In the following passage, I will explain the impact of this trend as well as solution to overcome this issue.
Many people from rural areas move to cities to seek quality education and medical facilities, therefore, many urban areas are densely populated. For instance, as the statistics say that, from 2001 to 2010, five hundred thousand people have been displaced to major cities from remote villages, which shows that rural areas are being neglected by the ruling government. Furthermore, many people who are below the poverty line are losing their life, due to insufficient medical facilities in rural areas. Similarly, financial disparity between people living in rural and urban areas are getting widened of late, which states that job opportunities in remote areas are very low.
Government need to have 5-year plan to develop rural areas with high class infrastructure facilities, which will reduce the mass migration to cities and improve the quality of life in remote villages. Additionally, elected members from all the rural areas have the responsibility to get the fund from the government to develop the industrial sector in rural areas, which will create more employment for youngsters. Moreover, boycotting elections by some villages had witnessed immediate attention of the government for ignoring the development of remote areas.
In conclusion, rural areas are the backbone of any country, thus, it has to developed along with urban areas. Migration towards cities could affect the living standards of city dwellers due to traffic congestion and increasing cost many daily needs. The government should concentrate in developing rural areas which will benefit the nation by economically in various ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'bring the latest'.
Suggestion: bring the latest
...e, many governments spent huge money in bring latest technologies to make easy mobility for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41065830721 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72460504417 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9917807843 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147574614703 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594113232828 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378504776667 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100219420026 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605038481908 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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