A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
1- Say where you went,
2- Where you stayed,
3- What you can do there
4- What the food was like.
Dear Andrew,
I trust you are keeping well? I was so happy to receive your letter last week about your intending trip to Nigeria, I would suggest a destination i have been recently.
As you know, I recently returned from my honeymoon vacation with my husband at Whispering Palm Resort centre, Badagry, Lagos. There are variety of facilities such as the spa, indoors sports centre, karaoke studio among others. At this place, you can relax and enjoy different sporting activities. they also have a mini museum, which warehouses the pictures of the first-storey building in Nigeria and other monumental activities in the history of our country.
Luckily, when I visited they had a promotion ongoing on all their residential suites, so myself and my husband lodged at the presidential lodge which has enclosed a bedroom, dinning room and a living room. The rooms were neat, clean, well-ventilated and convenient bedding. Furthermore, there was availability of local and international delicacies for our enjoyment, i used the opportunity in trying out chinese menus specifically Mushrooms and shrimps- it was so delicious.
I hope you would consider this place for your vacation.
Lots of love,
Ifeoluwa Dose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...nd enjoy different sporting activities. they also have a mini museum, which warehous...
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rnational delicacies for our enjoyment, i used the opportunity in trying out chin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32474226804 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94970145175 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716494845361 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.687292893 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180503886279 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707775886775 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811771565673 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137632251863 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841235755813 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.