You recently applied for 2 separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:
· An apology
· An explanation of your situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you with regret that I am unable to accept the senior developer's position at Xyz Technologies due to the transportation reasons.
As I described in my résumé, I live in Abc village which is 100 kilometers away from your company's main branch and to work over there I have to drive 4 hours a day. Because of my recent knee operation, it is not advisable for me to drive such a long distance. Moreover, there is no local transportation available to consider as my hometown is in a rural area. Therefore, I need to decline the job offer from your company.
Furthermore, I had also applied for the same place in another company Mnz Infotech which is the child firm of your company in my village. Fortunately, I received a similar job offer from that company yesterday and I am willing to accept that as well.
Thanking you for the opportunity.
Yours faithfully,
Full name
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- Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantages of both and your point of view. 78
- With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 67
- You recently applied for 2 separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:· An apology· An explanation of your situation 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67073170732 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90161906844 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640243902439 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9199358974 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159126951522 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697934952251 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646124263803 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114788417266 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694678003012 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.