Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
children are parents' diamonds.therefore, it is common that parents allow them to do whatever they like and fulfill their requests. However, children will have bad influences because of this activities. Especially, there will have consequences when they grow up. The reasons are obvious.
First and foremost, spoiling children will make them more selfish. As a general fact, mostly children who are given everything they ask for only care for their requirements. it is clear that they do not take any notice for everything even their parents. As the result, they will have a selfish attitude.
Second, children will become as stubborn as a mule and disobedient. As a foregone conclusion, if children are not allowed to do whatever they like and have their requests, they will become angry and disobedient. Until they are given which they want, they will feel fine. therefore, children's behaviors will be affected badly by their parents' spoil.
there are different consequences when children grow up. To begin with, children will absolutely dependent on their parents. they cannot be home and dry because they are too dependent on their parents' supplies. Secondly, children will become more stressful. they will find difficulty to make end meets. when they must leave their parents, they cannot know how to earn money, how to overcome the problems in their life. therefore, they will effortlessly become bad people. spoiling young children is a cause of increasing social evils.
In conclusion, it is clear that spoiling children exert badly on children's behaviors and futures. parents should only give children something which are really necessary. Otherwise, their children will have a bad future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3037037037 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76868635686 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496296296296 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2344357981 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.2608695652 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7391304348 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432650613492 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148940163877 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908754759854 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285828760651 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06138727805 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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