In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime but some people believe that these measure restrictions our individual freedom.
it is incontrovertible fact that technology has become a part and parcel in human's life. today, people are use cameras for cut the criminal activities. However, few masses think it impact on the freedom of people. this essay examines merits and demerits of this electronic gadget.
To embark with, nowadays everyone use camera everywhere like in offices, public places, and at home. they do this because to secure their self and it aware people to criminal activities. For example, now the government use the cameras in public vehicles to control the crime and protect the women. As well as, the criminals are not do any criminal activity under the restrictions of camera in any public area. it is very effective way to control to crime.
On the other hand, no doubt video camera give the security to people but, it impact on freedom of people. In this present era, some people who are use this technology against people. To epitomise, in many shopping centre they are set camera in changing rooms which effected the privacy of people.
In conclusion, each coin has two aspects if, cameras has advantageous for people it also has some disadvantages. but, it has more merits than demerits because, it is save people from a lot of illegal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88732394366 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65301006146 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572769953052 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8581932521 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3571428571 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227492551375 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743893222802 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473064043731 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129193057099 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409974961013 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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