some people think that government should spend money to protect the wild animals which are endangered but others think that extinction of wild animals is a natural phenomena and thus government should not waste money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Currently some people think that government should spend money to protect the wild animals which are endangered but other think that extinction of wild animals is a natural phenomena and thus government should not waste money.
It is important that extinction of wild animals is a natural phenomena and thus government should not waste money. It is because animal extinction is a natural thing. There are natural extinctions that occur throughout compilation at certain times and environments, randomly, nature selects species that are less able to adapt to changes in their environment. For example, currently animals are still threatened with extinction as the government conserves wild animals. extinction is a natural thing and is a life cycle or evolution in which when a species dies a new species will emerge, and it will continue and evolve as time passes and no one can change it, even though the government is conserving endangered animals .
In conclusion, the government does not need to spend money just to preserve wild animals, the government simply needs to make a policy about preserve habitats for animals and then apply and stretch them clearly and clearly.
On the other hand if the government carries out animal conservation, the government must think first in terms of the environment, humans and animals themselves, because treatment of animals and animal and environmental life patterns is highly dependent and each animal has their own environment, for example, preservation animals have now been threatened but the threat of extinction is still a public concern, such as passenger pigeons, tigers or animals such as orangutans in Kalimantan, Komodo dragons are threatened with extinction even though the government has made national parks and native Komodo dragons, the most worrying because they are endangered, the number Sumatran tiger sub-species are only around 300-400 only living in the wild. The large amount of illegal oil palm land clearing has disturbed tiger habitat. In fact, the population is estimated to be destroyed in 2050 then if the government spends money only on conservation demonstrations without considering the natural selection system, and human life patterns then it will only waste money in vain. There are still many other things that can be done to protect animals without spending money.
In conclution, it would be better if the government think before about to protect the wild animals, because many benafits are comparable to losses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32828282828 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82801434013 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.922489245 49.4020404114 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.833333333 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526165654261 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236311326148 0.084324248473 280% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225098006992 0.0667982634062 337% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359805050179 0.151304729494 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.250623902184 0.056905535591 440% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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