What are the reasons behind people s desire to travel?
us">In the modern world, almost all people are fond of travelling. it is the best way to learn a lot about yourself and the world. this essay will explain of the reasons behind people's desire to travel.
us">The first reason is that people want to get the new impressions, feelings and ideas for their lives. In other words, we can say that people aspire collecting moments of life not things. travelling gives us the opportunity not to think in a pattern, make our mind to be wider and sharper through the exploring of, for example, the city sights, the history of the country, a local nature, which provide us knowledge and understanding for lifetime. Moreover, communication with city dwellers, meeting with their lifestyle and outlook on life inspire us to change something in our life.
us">Another one significant reason is that travel makes people learn different languages. Because it is always better to know the language of the country you intend to visit. After learning the basics with books, apps, or videos, we can improve our skills by talking to a native speaker. For instance, English is spoken in almost all over the world, and most often it gives a chance to improve our speaking part.
us">Lastly, people want to become independent and responsible for their lives. Who travel a lot, learn to go beyond the comfort zone. As soon as this happens, they begin to cope with situations that they would never have encountered in a usual life, for instance loss of visa or wallet, and then through overcoming of such situations people obtain a valuable life experience.
us">In conclusion, getting the new impressions, feelings, learning different languages and aspiration to independent and responsible are the ones of significant reasons behind people's desire to travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19594594595 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01350593866 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6984316657 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251949186564 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101029581856 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141039785921 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180866904605 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108763276311 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.