You booked theater tickets in advance. Write a letter to your friend to let him know you would not be able to make it.
Explain apologize
What the problem is?
What can be done with the tickets?
Dear Jan,
Hope you are heal and hearty. I am extremely sorry for not been able to make up for the theater show of the next morning.
I was so excited about the show because my favorite artist was going to perform. You can understand my excitement by seeing the way I have done all the planning and advance booking. However, do to some urgent work I will not be able to attend the same.
Actually, one of my cousin Tom, you remember him our senior during school days, has made a sudden plan to visit our country. He will be there only for two days, and requested me to accompany him to in his visit to one of our close relative. As, he is coming after long time certainly it become impossible for me to say no. Moreover, we have close bond and I want to spend some quality time with him.
If you want you can collect he tickets from me and can enjoy the event with another friend or if not impossible than please let me know, I will give the ticket to the young child near my house as he has not managed to get the booking because of rush.
Sorry once again, hope to hear from you soon.
Yours truly,
Maninder Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'healed'.
Suggestion: healed
Dear Jan, Hope you are heal and hearty. I am extremely sorry for no...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... is coming after long time certainly it become impossible for me to say no. Moreover, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23041474654 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08941332153 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.166603726 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255763399556 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745842134631 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600896312127 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123509686015 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634158269642 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.