A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Mark,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in order to thank you for looking after my house and pet dog while I am away on a vacation for a few days and to provide some instructions which will make things easier for you while you stay in my house. Let me explain in detail.
Although I will be reachable on my Singapore number in case any urgent matter comes up please call me on +6235748 which will be my local contact in Indonesia. Additionally please take good care of my dog as you need to feed him dog food and milk twice a day moreover you need to also take him outside for a walk in the nearby park in the morning. The dog food is kept in the shelf beside the refrigerator and the milk will be inside the fridge.
Lastly, make sure that you close all the windows of the master and common room as the rainwater comes in which spoils the wooden flooring. Additionally please make sure that you water the plants in my balcony.
I hope you have a pleasant stay at my house and do call me in case you need to clarify anything else.
Warm wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... my house. Let me explain in detail. Although I will be reachable on my Singapore num...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... will be my local contact in Indonesia. Additionally please take good care of my dog as you ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 140, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...es in which spoils the wooden flooring. Additionally please make sure that you water the pla...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21153846154 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20003277948 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9717588414 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176962092426 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614955431579 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738373331884 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114687791277 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907609721365 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.